For my ENG 100 class Professor Andaluz asked us to revise one of our two drafts. I chose to revise the Capturing the moment draft. This essay would be a fully graded assignment and be graded as a full college essay. I received a 95% on this essay. I'm most proud of the grade I received on this assignment, it was worth the late night writing . The most difficult part of this task was creating a really well rounded essay when I haven't written a real essay since Sophomore year. I could improve on this work with a more well rounded conclusion paragraph. I could redo this assignment. I would put more revision in my ending paragraph and talk more about the personality of the dog. This assignment relates to past learning by using my background writing skills that I've learned in this class. The 21st century skill this assignment relates to is the self directional 21st century skill. This skill relates to the assignment because the whole essay was written only by me and we had to do it on our own time. I could develop on this 21st century skill by getting better at time management |